A good education!
학생이 쓴 원문
Education has the potential power to change people and the world.
It is because the definition of education is \"education is a planned change in human behavior\".
So I think if everyone had access to a good education, this world will develop better and become more beautiful by them.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
Very well said.
I couldn\'t agree with you more.
Thank you for all of your efforts.
I always wish you the best of luck.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Education has the potential power to change people and the world.
>> Correct
It is because the definition of education is \"education is a planned change in human behavior\".
It is because the definition of education is \"education is a planned change in human behavior\".
>> Correct
So I think if everyone had access to a good education, this world will develop better and become more beautiful by them.
So I think if everyone had access to a good education, this world will develop better and become more beautiful by them.
>> So I think if everyone had access to a good education, this world will develop better and become more beautiful.
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