A guy turned himself to the police
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A guy turned himself to the police
>>correct
A guy who gropped a girl's thigh who sat next to him turned himself to the police after the clip recorded about what he did by another passenger in the same carrige was uploaded on the internet and it is under the fire.
>>Correct
I think he was afriad that his privacy will be uncovered because of the clip and if he hadn't turned himself to the polic, he would have been more condemned by the public.
>>I think he was afraid that his privacy would be undercovered because of the clip if he hadn’t turned himself to the police, he would have bee more condemned by the public.
I don't know how she will react but I hope that she is not hesitant to speak up or punish him.
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It is true that many women still think getting a sexual harrassment would be ashame for her.
>>It is true that many women still think that it is shameful to get sexually harassed.
And this thought comes from if she behaves in a right way, sexual harrassment will not happen to her.
>>This is from the belief that if she would have acted in a proper way, the sexual harassment wouldn't have happened.
But it is not true.
>>But this is not true.
There are some people who are not normal.
>>Correct
And she can't do anything with those people.
>>She can’t do anything with those people.
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