A handful of rest

2023-03-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jhozel

학생이 쓴 원문

\"A handful of rest is better than two handfuls of hard work and chasing after the wind \" At first I didn\'t find the meaning of the sentence. Looking at the words for a while, I understand gradually the passage. What I\'ve learned from it is that we should be satisfied and be grateful with our life. Here, \'two handfuls of hard work \' means the desire to succeed in life. \'Chasing after the wind \'means the pursuit of futile things. Lastly a handful of rest means not to pursue the desire and pause to think. Too much desire makes our body and minds sick.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for finishing your homework! You made an excellent point. Keep it up! ^^
Have a great day ahead! 
-T.Jhozel 
\"A handful of rest is better than two handfuls of hard work and chasing after the wind \"
>>Correct!
At first I didn\'t find the meaning of the sentence.
>> Correct!
OR: 
At first, I couldn\'t figure out what the sentence meant. 
Looking at the words for a while, I understand gradually the passage.
>>After a while of looking at the words, I gradually understand the passage. 
What I\'ve learned from it is that we should be satisfied and be grateful with our life.
>> Correct!
OR: 
What I\'ve learned from it is that we should be content and grateful for our lives. 
Here, \'two handfuls of hard work \' means the desire to succeed in life.
>> Correct!
\'Chasing after the wind \'means the pursuit of futile things.
>> Correct!
Lastly a handful of rest means not to pursue the desire and pause to think.
>> Lastly, a handful of rest means not pursuing the desire and pausing to reflect. 
Too much desire makes our body and minds sick.
>> Correct!

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