A handful of rest

2023-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jhozel

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In the past I overworked without resting even on weekends. Those days I had many goals such as buying my own house, buying a car, and investing for the future. The goals are mainly earning more money. Meanwhile I had a problem on my womb and I had to get a big surgery to remove my womb. Since then I adjusted my schedule. And I arranged my second house in the countryside. I realized that I needed to have a handful of rest. Thanks to my second house and my vegetable garden, I recovered totally and I had a lesson.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, Gi [이름]!

Thank you for finishing your homework!

I\'m glad you\'ve found a work-life balance. :)

-T.Jhozel

In the past I overworked without resting even on weekends.

>> Correct!
OR: In the past, I overworked without taking breaks, even on weekends.

Those days I had many goals such as buying my own house, buying a car, and investing for the future.

>> I had many goals back then, such as getting my first home, buying a car, and investing for the future.

The goals are mainly earning more money.

>> Correct!
OR: The main goals are to make more money.

Meanwhile I had a problem on my womb and I had to get a big surgery to remove my womb.

>> Correct!
OR: Meanwhile, I had a womb problem that required extensive surgery to remove.

Since then I adjusted my schedule. And I arranged my second house in the countryside.

>> Since then, I\'ve adjusted my schedule. I additionally built up my second home in the countryside.

I realized that I needed to have a handful of rest.

>> Correct!

Thanks to my second house and my vegetable garden, I recovered totally and I had a lesson.

>> Correct!
OR: I recovered completely and learned a valuable lesson thanks to my second home and vegetable garden.

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