A hard time
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I hardly cry in front of people in everyday life.
Of course, I often cry in front of GOD.
I wonder when I bit my lip and fought back the tears.
I think of the memory. Maybe it was then.
There were a lot of problems when I prepared my doctoral dissertation.
I had a hard time many times at that time.
강사 첨삭
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Actually, I hardly cry in front of people in everyday life.
>> Correct
Of course, I often cry in front of GOD.
Of course, I often cry in front of GOD.
>> Correct
I wonder when I bit my lip and fought back the tears.
I wonder when I bit my lip and fought back the tears.
>> I wonder whether I ever bit my lip and fought back the tears.
I think of the memory.
I think of the memory.
>> I\'m trying to bring up the memory.
Maybe it was then.
>> Maybe, it happened in the past.
There were a lot of problems when I prepared my doctoral dissertation.
There were a lot of problems when I prepared my doctoral dissertation.
>> There were a lot of problems when I was preparing for my doctoral dissertation.
I had a hard time many times at that time.
I had a hard time many times at that time.
>> I had a hard time then.
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