A husband may work inside the home when wife is out to work.

2018-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

Our church is happy communication. I think. We love everybody. On Sunday I went to church. Going there, I play the violin. Todays, I am busy for working. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you so much for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night.

Talk to you tomorrow ☺


Our church is happy communication. I think.

>> Our church is where we can have a pleasant communication, I think.


We love everybody.

>> CORRECT


On Sunday I went to church.

>> I go to church on Sundays.

>> OR: I go to church every Sunday.


Going there, I play the violin.

>> I play the violin there.


Todays, I am busy for working.

>> I am busy working these days.


Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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