A indefendence day.

2012-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi my beautiful(i just think...) teacher. Let me talk about the indefendence day in korea. That day is a meaningful for koean. because, we had been liberated from Japan which hadinvaded Korea since Fifth of August 1945. But, seriously, that is going down the meaning of the day these days. we are just known as a holiday, don't know about what happened that day. so do I.. anyway..haha it was very serious topic, wasn't it? It shold ba assignment?, I don't know exactly.. anyway have a good weekend. hope you don't modify my sentence. haha see you.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!  I am very glad that you really want to study the English language. You are right! I know baby that I am beautiful. Hahaha! No, I am just kidding. Anyway, GOOD JOB   [이름] because you were able to tell me something about your Libreation Day. Hahaha! I think baby you have to search more about your Liberation Day. Anyway, here are my corrections for you my dear. Check them out. Well anyway, I want you to enjoy your weekend too. Okay? Oh! Say hello to your Dad, Mom and to Tony. ENJOY AND HAVE FUN! -Teacher Chloe Hi my beautiful(i just think...) teacher. >>Hi my beautiful teacher. Let me talk about the indefendence day in korea. >>Let me tell you about our Liberation day in Korea. >> Let me tell you about our Liberation day in our country. That day is a meaningful for koean. >>It is a meaningful day for Korean this day. >>This day is very meaningful to Korean. because, we had been liberated from Japan which hadinvaded Korea since Fifth of August 1945. >>It is beacause we had been liberated from Japan since the 5th of August 1945. But, seriously, that is going down the meaning of the day these days. >>But, seriously, we don't really know the real meaning of this holiday nowadays. we are just known as a holiday, don\'t know about what happened that day. >>We just knew that this is a holiday, I don't exactly know what had happened during that day. so do I.. anyway..haha it was very serious topic, wasn\'t it? >>Anyway, this is a very serious topic. Isnt't it? It shold ba assignment?,I don\'t know exactly.. anyway have a good weekend. hope you don\'t modify my sentence. haha see you. >>I don't know exactly how to tell you about our holiday. Anyway, have a good weekend. I hope that you will correct my sentences. I will see you on Monday.

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