a kind of food I will never eat
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A kind of food I will never eat is the bug.This is because bugs have terrible outlooks. But many experts are saying that we will become to eat bugs because of climate change. If the situation really comes, I think that I should eat bugs but I really don’t want to eat bugs.
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Hi, Jacob!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille
A kind of food I will never eat is the bug.
>> CORRECT!
This is because bugs have terrible outlooks.
>> This is because bugs have terrible looks.
But many experts are saying that we will become to eat bugs because of climate change.
But many experts are saying that we will become to eat bugs because of climate change.
>> But many experts are saying that we might eat bugs in the future because of climate change.
If the situation really comes, I think that I should eat bugs but I really don’t want to eat bugs.
>> CORRECT!
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