A lesson

I took for a walk in park yesterday night. Later, I watched the show program in television. An actor, Jin-Mo, showed up there. After he appeared in a movie, he had become popular. Soon, he lost his popularity because he was full of arrogance. he was very regreting his arrogance and confessed to audiences frankly. In the end, he regain his good image. I had learned a lesson through the program. It is "Don't forgot my original intention. "

Hello Prescilla, Good thing that you had a walk last night.It is better because you will have a short exercise and it also help you in relieving your stress.After reading your composition,I search Jin-Mo in the web,I was intrigue about the issue of his arrogance.Well,Lesson leraned.Don't feel that you have everything and you can have them all forever..   LinaStay Humble!   I took for a walk in park yesterday night. >>I took a walk in the park yesterday night.Later, I watched the show program in television. >>Later,I watched a program/program in televisionAn actor, Jin-Mo, showed up there. >>An actor,Jin-Mo,shown there.After he appeared in a movie, he had become popular. >> After he appeared in a movie, he became popular. Soon, he lost his popularity because he was full of arrogance. >>Correct >>Soon.he lost his popularity because of his arrogance.Better he was very regreting his arrogance and confessed to audiences frankly. >>He was regretful of  his arrogance and confessed to audience. In the end, he regain his good image. >>CorrectI had learned a lesson through the program. >>Correct It is "Don't forgot my original intention. " >>Correct