A letter
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear my teacher, Cam.
I'm so sorry for not telling you yesterday that I have another schedule today.
This morning,it just hit me that I totally forgot about it yesterday.
Today's schedule was a lecture about startup business that I'm interested in.
It was not only a lecture actually but a kind of event supported by the government and the associatoin of venture business. so young people like me gather up and listend lectures and got advice from our mentor arranged to each table.
It was a good experience for me but at the same time I felt not good.
I think I have to say-goodbye.
See you on monday and once again I'm so sorry to bother you.
강사 첨삭
Wow, that was one great experience you had today my dear..:)
And dont worry you dont have to say sorry because I totally understand you baby..
I just hope you give your self enough time to rest as well, please..^^
Talk to you again on Monday and have a great weekend..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Dear my teacher, Cam. >>correctI\'m so sorry for not telling you yesterday that I have another schedule today. >>correctThis morning,it just hit me that I totally forgot about it yesterday. >>correctToday\'s schedule was a lecture about startup business that I\'m interested in. >>correctIt was not only a lecture actually but a kind of event supported by the government and the associatoin of venture business.
>>correct
so young people like me gather up and listend lectures and got advice from our mentor arranged to each table. >>So young people like me gathered and listened to some lectures and got some advice from our mentor arranged to each table.It was a good experience for me but at the same time I felt not good. >>correctI think I have to say-goodbye. >>correctSee you on monday and once again I\'m so sorry to bother you.
>>correct
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