A letter

Dear [Name] Cam. I hope you recover from cold. Because of typoon, it's really cold. Yesterday, I got wet a lot but I had to move here and there with wearing wet clothes so I felt really bad. So this morning, I didn't want to go to school because of headache but my grandma just made me come here at school. However, now I feel much better as I slept in a bus. I think I'm physically really strong. Yesterday I started another part time job which is working at the museum. I love this job because I can listen to English while working so it's quite time saver for me. Even though the payment is not enough for me, I'm thinking of reducing some of my part time job seriously. but it's hard to decide.

Hello there!!!! A wonderful Tuesday!!!!   Thank you very much for your concern about my health, that\'s really sweet! You\'re right, these days it\'s really cold so we should both take care of ourselves. As you know, Health is Wealth. ^^ Working hard is good but of course you also need to take some rest..^^ Anyway, with this composition, you did really great! I am happy that there are just really minor errors. Next time, just be very careful with your punctuatuion marks. Also, kindly review your conjunctions.   Have a nice day and see you!!!! ~~   -Cam-   Dear [Name]>>>Dear [Name], Hi Cam. I hope you recover from cold. >>>Hi Cam! I hope you have already recovered from your colds.Because of typoon, it\'s really cold.>>>Because of the typhoon, it\'s really cold.Yesterday, I got wet a lot but I had to move here and there with wearing wet clothes so I felt really bad. >>> Yesterday, I was really wet but I had to move here and there wearing wet clothes so I felt really bad.So this morning, I didn\'t want to go to school because of headache but my grandma just made me come here at school. However, now I feel much better >>>So, this morning, I didn\'t want to go to school because I have headache but my grandma just made me came here at school. However, now I feel  as I slept in a bus. I think I\'m physically really strong. >>>much better as I slept in a bus. I think I\'m really physically strong.Yesterday I started another part time job which is working at the museum. >>> Yesterday, I started another part time job which is working at the museum.I love this job because I can listen to English while working so it\'s quite time saver for me. >>>I love this job because I can listen to English while working so it helps me save time.Even though the payment is not enough for me, I\'m thinking of reducing some of my part time job seriously. but it\'s hard to decide. >>> Eventhough the pay is not enough for me, I\'m thinking of reducing some of my part time job seriously but it\'s hard to decide.