A letter for me
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, aftter shool, I checked our mail box.
And there was a big letter sitting on the mailbox.
And that letter was for me!!!
I knew it because all the letters in korean has a sign like this ### 귀하 on the front.
And there was a sign like this [이름] 귀하 on the front!!!
So I ran to my home.
But nobody was in the house.
So I called to my dad.
And he said I have to wait for him.
So I waited and watied, and finilly he came!!
So we opend the letter together. But there was a dumb bank policy written on it.
THE END
BYE~ BYE~~~
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ji[이름]! Is this based on your real experience or is it just a story that you made up? Anyway, too bad that letter wasn\'t what you expected.
Cheer up! I\'m sure you\'ll receive a personal letter from a friend soon.
Kindly check the corrections here.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Today, aftter shool, I checked our mail box.
>> CORRECT!
>> aftter - afterAnd there was a big letter sitting on the mailbox.
>> There was a big letter sitting inside the mailbox.And that letter was for me!!!
>> CORRECT! I knew it because all the letters in korean has a sign like this ### 귀하 on the front.
>> I knew it was for me because all the letters were in Korean and it has \"### 귀하\" written in front.And there was a sign like this [이름] 귀하 on the front!!!
>> There was also \"[이름] 귀하\" written in front of the letter.
So I ran to my home.
>> So I ran to my house.
OR >> So I ran inside my house.
But nobody was in the house.
>> CORRECT! So I called to my dad.
>> I called my dad.And he said I have to wait for him.
>> He told me I had to wait for him.So I waited and watied, and finilly he came!!
>> So I waited and he finally came home after a while.So we opend the letter together. >> We opened the letter together.
But there was a dumb bank policy written on it.
>> However, there was nothing but a dumb bank policy written on it.
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