A letter to Academy

This is my letter to children's academy in America for my daughter. Please read and correct this. ================================================================ Hi~ I'm suppose to go there next week on business from here in Korea. I'll come with my 6 year-old daughter for 2months. One of my acquaintances recmmended me your academy. Can I apply for the full day class ? And I'm also wondering if you have any experiences like this. Because she can't speak English very well. I hope I can get your reply as soon as possible. Thank you!

Hi there,         I think you are really busy preparing for your business trip in America. I hope you would have a great time there. I'll surely miss you. I will wait for you. -Verna-  This is my letter to children's academy in America for my daughter. Please read and correct this. >>Correct================================================================Hi~>>CorrectI'm suppose to go there next week on business from here in Korea. >>I'm suppose to go there next week on business from Korea. I'll come with my 6 year-old daughter for 2months.>>I'll go there with my 6 year-old daughter for 2months.One of my acquaintances recommended me your academy. >>Correct  Can I apply for the full day class ?>>CorrectAnd I'm also wondering if you have any experiences like this. Because she can't speak English very well. >>And I'm also wondering if you have cases like this because she can't speak English very well.I hope I can get your reply as soon as possible.>>I'm hoping for your response as soon as possible.Thank you! >>Correct