a life time goal that i want to achieve

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I think that question is confusing to usual person.

>>> I think that question is confusing to a common person.

To be honest.. the question you asked is not weird, but the reason to feel weird to someone, we are not used to ask a question like that.

>>> To be honest, the question you asked is not weird. It\'s just a question which is not usually asked to someone.

That’s not a good phenomenon. 

>>> That\'s not a good question. [I don\'t understand what you\'re trying to ask here. I just feel like you don\'t like the question.]

The modern people hate serious question.
>>> The modern people hate serious questions.

Anyway, I have many goals of my life.

>>> Anyway, I have many goals in my life.

I can divide on two categories, The first one is theoretical goal and the second one is practical goal. 

>>> I can divide it to two categories. The first one is a theoretical goal and the second one a practical goal.

I wanna tell you first what my practical goal is.

>>> Correct! [want to]

I want to be an important person where I’m in.

>>> I want to be an important person.

For example, In my company, In my home, In my country. 

>>> For example, in my company, my home or my country.

But reason that I want to do is all for The glory of God.

>>> But the reason that I want that is all for the glory of God.

That’s all. That’s my First goal that I want to do.

>>> That\'s all. That\'s the first goal that I want to achieve.

So my practical goal is just for the way that I show his glory to the world.

>>> So my practical goal is to show HIS glory to the world.

Although It is not a big field like “World”.

>>> Although it is not literally the entire world.

There’s no other more important goal.

>>> OR: I don\'t have any other important goal.

That’s my motto.

>>> OR: That\'s the only thing that I want.