A little teacher

2010-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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The first experience that comes to mind is when I entered elementary school.When I was in the first year,my homeroom teacher was an old male teacher in late 50.He looked like a grandfather and I liked him.I don't remember exactly the reason I become a little teacher in my class.Maybe I was smart and got a high score in the test.My teacher announced to the class I'm a little teacher from now,if students have any question they can ask to help me.Even my friends called me 'A little teacher'and I liked the title.I tried hard to help other students and did my best to understand them.After that I knew I had a talent to teach and loved to do that so decided to become a teacher.The memory was valuable to me and I sometimes miss that time and I wanted to show him I became a real big teacher.

강사 첨삭

Hi there once Little Teacher! You actually made me smile with your composition and I, too, can recall my memories in the past when I was little. It’s really refreshing to reminisce the past and think about our pivotal experiences that led us to where we are now. I wish you could become a great inspiration to others, as your elementary 'grandfather' teacher was. Have a great time!   The first experience that comes to mind is when I entered elementary school. >>> The first experience that comes to my mind of being a teacher is when I entered elementary school. When I was in the first year, my homeroom teacher was an old male teacher in late 50. >>>When I was in the first year, my homeroom teacher was an old male teacher in his late 50’s. He looked like a grandfather and I liked him. >>>Correct I don't remember exactly the reason I become a little teacher in my class. >>> Correct >>>OR I don’t remember exactly why I became a little teacher in my class. Maybe I was smart and got a high score in the test. >>> Correct >>>OR Maybe I was smart and I got a high score in the test. My teacher announced to the class I'm a little teacher from now, >>>Correct if students have any question they can ask to help me. >>>If students have any questions, they can ask help from me. Even my friends called me 'A little teacher'and I liked the title. >>>Correct I tried hard to help other students and did my best to understand them. >>>Correct After that I knew I had a talent to teach and loved to do that so decided to become a teacher. >>> After that I knew I had a talent to teach and loved to do that so I eventually decided to become a teacher. The memory was valuable to me and I sometimes miss that time and I wanted to show him I became a real big teacher. >>>Correct

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