a lottery ticket.
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강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
Happy Wednesday!! Yeah one more day and it’s gonna be a long weekend. Wow, so you dreamt about a lottery. Just keep on trying maybe you have luck at it. I hope so. Always, stay happy and see you at our class.
Lei J
Good morning. lei.~
>>correct
it's a wednesday.
>>it’s already wednesday
if we work one day more, we could take a three days off.
>>we need to work one more day and it’ll be a 3 day weekend.
actually, i have to come to work at saturday.
>>correct
but that's ok.
>>correct
i just have to work half a day on
saturday.
>>correct
today's topic is a lottery ticket.
>>today’s topic is about lottery ticket
have you ever bought a lottery ticket?
>>correct
i think i don't have a fortune at fluke.
>>correct
whenever i bought a lottery ticket, it
was always a blank.
>>whenever I buy a ticket, it always
comes blank
yesterday, i was on the way home with my coworker.
>>yesterday, I was on my way home together with my co-worker
during the way, i feel thirsty.
>>on our way, I felt thirsty
so we dropped at convenience store.
>>so we dropped by in a convenience store
during the charge, i found an instant lottery ticket.
>>while on the cashier, I found an instant lottery ticket
i suggested to buy it.
>>correct
so i and my coworker bought it.
>>so we bought it
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