a lottery ticket.

2010-05-19 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Good morning. lei.~ it's a wednesday. if we work one day more, we could take a three days off. actually, i have to come to work at saturday. but that's ok. i just have to work half a day on saturday. today's topic is a lottery ticket. have you ever bought a lottery ticket? i think i don't have a fortune at fluke. whenever i bought a lottery ticket, it was always a blank. yesterday, i was on the way home with my coworker. during the way, i feel thirsty. so we dropped at convenience store. during the charge, i found an instant lottery ticket. i suggested to buy it. so i and my coworker bought it.

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Hi [이름]!!

Happy Wednesday!! Yeah one more day and it’s gonna be a long weekend. Wow, so you dreamt about a lottery. Just keep on trying maybe you have luck at it. I hope so. Always, stay happy and see you at our class.

Lei J

 

Good morning. lei.~
>>correct

it's a wednesday.

>>it’s already wednesday

if we work one day more, we could take a three days off.

>>we need to work one more day and it’ll be a 3 day weekend.

actually, i have to come to work at saturday.

>>correct

but that's ok.

>>correct

i just have to work half a day on saturday.
>>correct

today's topic is a lottery ticket.

>>today’s topic is about lottery ticket

have you ever bought a lottery ticket?

>>correct

i think i don't have a fortune at fluke.

>>correct

whenever i bought a lottery ticket, it was always a blank.
>>whenever I buy a ticket, it always comes blank

yesterday, i was on the way home with my coworker.

>>yesterday, I was on my way home together with my co-worker

during the way, i feel thirsty.

>>on our way, I felt thirsty

so we dropped at convenience store.

>>so we dropped by in a convenience store

during the charge, i found an instant lottery ticket.

>>while on the cashier, I found an instant lottery ticket

i suggested to buy it.

>>correct

so i and my coworker bought it.

>>so we bought it

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