a lottery ticket.

2010-05-19 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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before checked the luck, he suggested if we get the chance, divide the award as half for each other. i wished i could get the chance. but... sadly, i failed to get the chance again. ㅠ ㅠ on the other hands, my coworker got the chance. the award was 500won. so he changed it to another ticket. at that chance, we failed. even though, we failed to get the chance. it was a good time to release our stress.

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before checked the luck, he suggested if we get the chance, divide the award as half for each other. >>before we checked our luck, he suggested that if we win we will divide the reward into two. i wished i could get the chance. >>I wished I got the chance   but... sadly, i failed to get the chance again. ㅠ ㅠ>>bad sadly, I failed. on the other hands, my coworker got the chance. >>on the other hand, my co-worker got lucky. the award was 500won. >>the reward was 500won. so he changed it to another ticket. >>correct   at that chance, we failed. >>correct   even though, we failed to get the chance. >>correct   it was a good time to release our stress. >>I think it was a good way to release our stress.

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