A married life
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On the last Friday, my wife and I quarreled because I lended Hanbok, Korean traditional coloth, my friend who would have wedding 2 days after. She said that "You may regard your Hanbok as yours and you never asked me to lend the Hanbok your friend". She think that everything needs to talk with her before doing an action. But even though it does, sometimes people can miss to talk and should not talk with their wife. I think it is little important but she does not. Atually, our courting period is relatively short so that we have had this kind of troubles. Maybe, it is not just the difference between man and women but also the difference between she and I. So A married life would be a long process that two different lives are melted down in a bowl called a family. She is still angry of it.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sir
I'm sorry to hear about the misunderstanding between you and your wife.
Well, perhaps it's a lesson learned now. Sometimes, for married couples like you,
you tend to forget to acknowledge your partners and thus becomes a dispute on simple matters.
Anyway, I know that you can work things out with your wife pretty soon.
Goodluck!
On the last Friday, my wife and I quarreled because I lended Hanbok,
>>Last Friday, my wife and I quarelled because I lent out my Hanbok.
Korean traditional coloth, my friend who would have wedding 2 days after.
>>It is a Korean traditional costume.
>>My friend borrowed it 2 days before his wedding day.
She said that "You may regard your Hanbok as yours and you never asked me to lend the Hanbok your friend".
>>She said, "You may regard your Hanbok as yours but you didn't confided me about lending out your hanbok to your friend."
She think that everything needs to talk with her before doing an action.
>>She thinks that she should know what is happening before taking any action.
But even though it does, sometimes people can miss to talk and should not talk with their wife.
>>But eventhough she knows about it, sometimes a husband tends to forget mentioninng it to his wife.
I think it is little important but she does not.
>>I thought it wasn't important but for her it was a big deal.
Atually, our courting period is relatively short so that we have had this kind of troubles.
>>Actually, our courting period was relatively short so we have this kind of troubles.
Maybe, it is not just the difference between man and women but also the difference between she and I.
>>Maybe, it is not jut a difference between a man and woman but also a difference between her and me.
So A married life would be a long process that two different lives are melted down in a bowl called a family.
>>A married life takes a long process for both to become one and be a whole family.
She is still angry of it.
>>She's still angry about it.
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