A million dollars
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It is a very happy question for everyone.
If I have a million dollars, I will give some dollars to my parents.
And I would buy iPad with the other dollars.
Because buy an iPad is my wish.
Also, I would buy some house, snacks and toys for my cat.
And I will save the dollars.
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It is a very happy question for everyone.
>>> It is a question that brings joy to everyone.
If I have a million dollars, I will give some dollars to my parents.
>>> If I had a million dollars, I would give some to my parents.
And I would buy iPad with the other dollars.
And I would buy iPad with the other dollars.
>>> Then, I would use the rest to buy an iPad
Because buy an iPad is my wish.
Because buy an iPad is my wish.
>>> because it\'s something I\'ve always wanted.
Also, I would buy some house, snacks and toys for my cat.
Also, I would buy some house, snacks and toys for my cat.
>>> Additionally, I would buy some houses, snacks, and toys for my cat.
And I will save the dollars.
And I will save the dollars.
>>> Finally, I would save the remaining money.
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