A mysterious title and a story
학생이 쓴 원문
It would be better to write a mysterious title to attract people\'s attention, but I don\'t think we can ignore the influx of emotions and shocks when we look at the title after we finish reading the story. I think it\'s better to imply a story than a mysterious title because it has promotional effects such as recommending it to others by the person who read the book.
강사 첨삭
It would be better to write a mysterious title to attract people\'s attention, but I don\'t think we can ignore the influx of emotions and shocks when we look at the title after we finish reading the story.
>> It may be better to write a mysterious title to attract people’s attention, but we shouldn’t ignore the emotions and impact we feel when we look back at the title after finishing the story.
I think it\'s better to imply a story than a mysterious title because it has promotional effects such as recommending it to others by the person who read the book.
>> I think it’s better for a title to hint at the story rather than just being mysterious, because it can have a stronger promotional effect. For example, readers may recommend the book to others after reading it.
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