A need to make regulations for applications in

It turned out that accessing sex-related files through applications in smart phone is very easy. So, many underage adolescent can get the program, which is prohibited from approaching. There are some process they should complete such as putting pin number. However, that is not enough to protect children from noxious files since it is so easy to get through. In addition, the application are made and offered by foreign companies so that it is difficult to ask them to screen the programs by themselves. So, the lawmakers are trying to make an international regulations. Cooperation with other conturies globally is a right way to solve this problem. Internet connects all over the world so we need to deal with that at the international level.

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It turned out that accessing sex-related files through applications in smart phone is very easy.

>> correct

So, many underage adolescent can get the program, which is prohibited from approaching.

>> So, many under-aged adolescents can get the program, which is actually pohibited.

There are some process they should complete such as putting pin number.

>> There are some steps they should complete such as entering pin numbers.

However, that is not enough to protect children from noxious files since it is so easy to get through.

>> correct

In addition, the application are made and offered by foreign companies so that it is difficult to ask them to screen the programs by themselves.

>> In addition, the applications are made and offered by foreign companies, so it is difficult to ask them to screen the programs.

So, the lawmakers are trying to make an international regulations.

>> So, the lawmakers are trying to make international regulations.

Cooperation with other conturies globally is a right way to solve this problem.

>> Global cooperation of countries is the right way to solve this problem.

Internet connects all over the world so we need to deal with that at the international level.

>> The internet is accessible all over the world so we need to deal with the issue at the international level.