A nice day..!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Sir Martin!
Yes, I had a sweet sensible day! How about you?
Yes, Sir! Do your best! Believe in yourself that you can do it.
We will talk about this composition tomorrow?
You might want to review your composition;
Good evening! Did you have a nice day?
>>Correct
Thank you for proofreading any mistakes in my composition.!
>>>Thank you for proofreading my composition.
I feel ,It,s very helpful to learn English!
>>>I can feel that it is very helpful in learning English.
So,with learning English your proofread by my side , I can practice English better! Hahaha
>>>So, while learning English coupled with proofreading my compositions, I can practice English better!
However, when I review my recorded mp3 file about phone class ,I hear a kid voice who seemed to be as a 5years old.
>>>However, when I reviewed the recording of our phone class, I can hear a 5 year old child speaking.
He seem to have being immature and awkward.
>>>He seems immature and it is awkward to listen to.
I think, it might be the cause of not practicing English enough!
>>>I guess it is the result of not practicing English often!
and i feel It is not easy to learn English!
>>>And I started feeling that English is not easy to learn.
but I CAN DO IT ! I will try my best!!
>>>correct
Let me ask you a question!
>>>okay
What do you think of the most efective way to learn English!
>>>What do you think are the most effective ways to learn English?
Have a nice tuesday! I'll see you on wednesday!
>>>okay
>>>Tuesday Wednesday
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