A Nightmare
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [ESSAY] Write about a nightmare that you had or someone had.
I had a nightmare about my mom.
-It is like this:
I am at a filed. The weather is foggy.
And then, my mom suddenly appeared at my front.
I am so happy so I run to my mom and try to hug her.
But then, my mom suddenly disappeared.
Then, my mom again suddenly appeared at my front.
And I tried to hug my mom again.
But then, she disappeared.-
I don\'t like this dream!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Clair!
Here\'s your homework!
Cheers,
Jean~~~
Theme: [ESSAY] Write about a nightmare that you had or someone had.
I had a nightmare about my mom.
>> correct~~
-It is like this:
>> or: It went like this.
I am at a filed. The weather is foggy.
>> I am at a field and the weather is foggy.
And then, my mom suddenly appeared at my front.
>> And then, my mom suddenly appears in front of me.
I am so happy so I run to my mom and try to hug her.
>> correct~~
But then, my mom suddenly disappeared.
>> But then, my mom suddenly disappears.
Then, my mom again suddenly appeared at my front.
>> Then, my mom again suddenly appears in front of me.
And I tried to hug my mom again.
>> And I try to hug her again.
But then, she disappeared.-
>> But then, she disappears one more time.
I don\'t like this dream!
>> or: This is the reason why I consider this a nightmare.
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