A nightmare revisits Japan (Jung-ang Editorial Mar 04)
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“Look at this!” a Japanese friend wrote as he sent me a photo of empty shelves in a supermarket. The local store had run out of toilet paper. “I went to several stores, but couldn’t find a single roll.” As a rumor circulated that the material for toilet paper is imported from China, households and companies bulked up on toilet paper.
On Saturday, Japanese Prime Minister Shinzo Abe held a press conference at an unusual hour — 6 p.m. — and was asked about the toilet paper crisis. Abe said that unlike face masks, toilet paper was produced almost entirely in Japan and was not in shortage, so customers should remain calm.
The Japanese government took the unusual action of closing elementary, middle and high schools around the country on Friday. More than 16 million students are affected. Moms’ chat rooms were in a panic. They complained that they don’t understand why schools in prefectures without confirmed patients should be closed.
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“Look at this!” a Japanese friend wrote as he sent me a photo of empty shelves in a supermarket. The local store had run out of toilet paper. “I went to several stores, but couldn’t find a single roll.”
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As a rumor circulated that the material for toilet paper is imported from China, households and companies bulked up on toilet paper.
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>> As a rumor circulated that the material for toilet paper is imported from China, households and companies hoarded toilet paper.
On Saturday, Japanese Prime Minister Shinzo Abe held a press conference at an unusual hour — 6 p.m. — and was asked about the toilet paper crisis. Abe said that unlike face masks, toilet paper was produced almost entirely in Japan and was not in shortage, so customers should remain calm.
On Saturday, Japanese Prime Minister Shinzo Abe held a press conference at an unusual hour — 6 p.m. — and was asked about the toilet paper crisis. Abe said that unlike face masks, toilet paper was produced almost entirely in Japan and was not in shortage, so customers should remain calm.
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The Japanese government took the unusual action of closing elementary, middle and high schools around the country on Friday. More than 16 million students are affected. Moms’ chat rooms were in a panic. They complained that they don’t understand why schools in prefectures without confirmed patients should be closed.
The Japanese government took the unusual action of closing elementary, middle and high schools around the country on Friday. More than 16 million students are affected. Moms’ chat rooms were in a panic. They complained that they don’t understand why schools in prefectures without confirmed patients should be closed.
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