A parent shouldn't pierce a baby's ears.

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I do not like people has body piercing.

>> I don\'t like people to have body piercing.

>> OR: I don\'t like people having body piercing.

>> OR: I don\'t like people who have body piercing.

Because they want to pierce more and more after having body piercing.

>> It is because they will want to have it more and more after the first try of having body piercing.

>> OR: I don\'t like people having body piercing, because they will want to have it more and more after trying it.

I don\'t think it looks beautiful, wonderful and lovely.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: I don\'t think it looks pleasing to the eye.

>> OR: I don\'t think it looks pleasant.

I have seen people who have big hole on their tongue ears, or chin on TV.

>> I have seen people who have big holes in their tongues, ears or chins on TV.

I wonder if they visited proper shop accredited by government of if shop owner has professional license.

>> I wonder if they visited proper shops accredited by their governments and if the shop owners have professional licenses.

>> OR: I wonder if they visited proper shops accredited by their governments and if the shop owners are licensed.

It is really hurt people\'s body, so procedure should be performed by approved person or licensed person.

>> It really hurts people\'s bodies, so the procedure should be performed by a licensed person.

For the reason I explained above, I agree that parent should not pierce a baby\'s ears.

>> For the reasons I explained above, I agree that a parent should not pierce a baby\'s ears.

>> OR: For the reasons I explained above, I agree that a parent should not pierce his or her baby\'s ears.