A perfect Weekend
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I\'ve enjoyed lots of wonderful weekends, but a perfect weekend for me is a day when I proposed to my girlfriend.
>> I\'ve enjoyed lots of wonderful weekends. But, a perfect weekend for me is a day when I proposed to my girlfriend.
It\'s just a month that we knew each other.
>> It was just a month ago since I met her.
When we met first, we was a completely stranger.
>> My girlfriend and I were completely strangers when I first met her.
We met every weekend for attending economy class and had dinner together.
>> We usually meet every weekend on our economy class and we also have dinner together.
We got closer and closer.
>> CORRECT
By the time I realized I loved her, she had already prepared to be proposed.
>> By the time I realize my feelings for her, she was prepared to be proposed.
That day, I bought heart shaped flowers and gave it to her.
>> I bought a heart shaped bouquet of flowers on that day for her.
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