A person ypu know is planning to move to your city. What do you think this person would like and dis
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Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the homework I sent last time.
I realized that you\'re right with your opinion, sometimes even if there are a lot of good things a place can offer, people still tend to check the disadvantages they would be having. This way, they will decide whether it\'s more advantageous or not for them.
And at the end of the day, even if we tell them all the things we know, it\'s still their decision that will count.
Thanks again, and Merry Christmas [이름]!! ^^
~Teacher Gina
If someone moved to my city, I\'ll tell about negative things to them.
>> If someone moved to my city, I\'ll tell about the negative things to them.
I think people tend to think a apart of negative more than positive.
>> I think people tend to think more of the negative side more than the positive.
Even if they have 100 things of benefit, they are worried about a only one thing.
>> Even if there are 100 benefits to receive, they are still worried about one negative thing.
Few days ago, I want to buy clothes.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I wanted to buy some clothes a few days ago.
And i found a perfect dress for end of year party.
>> And I found a perfect dress for the year end party.
I really like a design, color, material, but it\'s little expensive.
>> I really like the design, color and material, but it\'s a little expensive.
I\'m sure if i wore this at the party, I\'ll be shining than other people who attended there.
>> I\'m sure that if I wore this at the party, I would be shining more than anyone who attended there.
But, i didn\'t buy it, because it has only one bad thing, \"Price\".
>> But I didn\'t buy it because of one thing, it\'s \"Price\".
So, I mean it doesn\'t matter to them what i say to good or bad.
>> So, I mean it doesn\'t matter to them whether I say if it\'s good or bad.
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