A picture is worth a thousand words
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Now is the visual age.
>> correct!
A picture is worth a thousand words.
>> correct!
Painting gives people a strong impact.
>> correct!
There can persuade someone at a time.
>> You can persuade someone using pictures.
Whereas words need a lot time to persuade someone.
>> Whereas words need a lot of time to persuade someone.
Sometimes people can not understand the intentions and meaning of other people who write.
>>Sometimes people cannot understand the intentions and meaning of other people who write.
At east asia civilization, people say that seeing is believing, or to see for oneself is worth all the books of travel.
>> In East Asia civilization, people say that seeing is believing, or to see for oneself is worth all the books on traveling.
And a thousand hearing are not worth one seeing.
>> Hearing a hundred times is not as good as seeing once. (Chinese Proverb)
There is one more thing.
>> correct!
There is nothing like seeing for oneself.
>> correct!
Figuratively speaking, the proof of the pudding is in the eating.
>> correct!
We live in the age of visual.
IS THIS>> We live in the age of virtual reality.
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