A piece of advice to my husband
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If I would give a piece of advice to my husband, I would advise him to take care of his teeth. He sometimes has a toothache because of cavity. He has already had four teeth implanted. Still, I don\'t think he makes much effort to improve his condition. There is even a time when he falls into sleep without brushing his teeth, drinking so much. That\'s why I always nag to him.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
It\'s nice to know that you really care for your husband and that you are concerned not only about his physical health, but also when it comes to dental health.
- T. Caitlyn
If I would give a piece of advice to my husband, I would advise him to take care of his teeth.
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He sometimes has a toothache because of cavity.
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He has already had four teeth implanted.
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Still, I don\'t think he makes much effort to improve his condition.
>> CORRECT
There is even a time when he falls into sleep without brushing his teeth, drinking so much.
>> There are even times when he falls asleep without brushing his teeth, despite drinking so much.
That\'s why I always nag to him.
>> CORRECT
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