A plan has maked.
학생이 쓴 원문
I have no plan untill am.11:00.
Now, 12:00 pm, I have a plan.
This plan is to attend a baptism.
Because my boyfriend will be godparent of other friends couple's son.
Maybe this friday will be very happy day.
God bless down to my boyfriend and the baptizing son.
강사 첨삭
Hi there,
Thank you for your composition.It's good to know that you have a plan this weekend. Have a nice weekend! See you on Monday!
-Teacher Faye-
I have no plan untill am.11:00.>>I have no plan until 11:00 am.Now, 12:00 pm, I have a plan.>>Right now, it's 12:00 o 'clock and I have a plan.This plan is to attend a baptism.>>CorrectBecause my boyfriend will be godparent of other friends couple's son.>> Because my boyfriend will be godfather of other friend's couple's son.Maybe this friday will be very happy day. >> Maybe this Friday will be a very happy day.God bless down to my boyfriend and the baptizing son.
>>God bless my boyfriend and the person to be baptized.
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