A plan of 2019
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Jay,
Like you said, your relationship was able to withstand your time in the army. You\'ll be away for a shorter time this time around so I\'m sure your girlfriend will wait for you. It will make your relationship stronger, I think.(\",)
~Lynn
2019 will be an adventurous year to me as I have a plan to go to Australia and have to apply to companies.
>> 2019 will be an adventurous year to me as I have a plan to go to Australia and apply to companies their.
I wish that I can experience many things from the working holiday such as many new friends, improvement in English speaking skill and so on.
>> correct!
I will be come back to Korea at October and then I \'m going to prepare the resume for internship.
>> I will be coming back to Korea in October and then I \'m going to prepare my resume for internship.
These are very important to me but, best of all I hope to keep a good relation with my girlfriend.
>> correct!
Actually, I\'m agonizing how we can overcome the such things from long distance.
>> Actually, I\'m agonizing how we can overcome a long distance relationship.
We already went through the time of army, but we could contact to each other whenever she or I want to meet because we had many ways like leave and visit.
>> We already went through this when I went to the army, but we could contact to each other whenever she or I want to meet because we had many ways like leave and visit.
Thus, the most imprtant plan for this year is not to break up with her because of working holiday.
>> Thus, the most imprtant plan for this year is not to break up with her because of my working holiday.
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