A present for me
학생이 쓴 원문
1.Why does he want to earn money?
Because he want to get his step mother present.
2.What is the first thing he does to earn money?
She got upstairs and got rid of the empty bottles and cans.
3.How did the stepmother probably feel at the end of the story?
I think she likes it.
4.How can you tell?
Because she liked the flowers (I think)
5.What word from paragraph 2 means the opposite of give?
The opposite of give is keep.
6.What is paragraph three mostly about?
It is mostly about helping peoples.
7.What are three things the boy did to raise money for his stepmother’s birthday dinner?
He got rid of the bottles and cans upstairs. he walk the dogs. he got rid of the trash and the newspapers.
8.What happened right after the neighbor said she could not afford to pay him to help her with her groceries?
He helped her anyway.
강사 첨삭
1.Why does he want to earn money?
Because he want to get his step mother present.
Because he want to get his step mother present.
>>> Because he wanted to take his stepmother out for dinner on her birthday.
2.What is the first thing he does to earn money?
She got upstairs and got rid of the empty bottles and cans.
2.What is the first thing he does to earn money?
She got upstairs and got rid of the empty bottles and cans.
>>> He went to the lady living upstairs to get rid of the empty bottles and cans so he could keep the deposit.
3.How did the stepmother probably feel at the end of the story?
I think she likes it.
I think she likes it.
>>> correct
4.How can you tell?
Because she liked the flowers (I think)
>>> Because she hugged him and said it was the best birthday present ever.
5.What word from paragraph 2 means the opposite of give?
The opposite of give is keep.
5.What word from paragraph 2 means the opposite of give?
The opposite of give is keep.
>>> The opposite of give is take (took).
6.What is paragraph three mostly about?
It is mostly about helping peoples.
6.What is paragraph three mostly about?
It is mostly about helping peoples.
>>> It is mostly about doing some errands to help out neighbors in exchange of a pay.
7.What are three things the boy did to raise money for his stepmother’s birthday dinner?
He got rid of the bottles and cans upstairs. he walk the dogs. he got rid of the trash and the newspapers.
7.What are three things the boy did to raise money for his stepmother’s birthday dinner?
He got rid of the bottles and cans upstairs. he walk the dogs. he got rid of the trash and the newspapers.
>>> He got rid of the bottles and cans upstairs. He walked the dogs. He also got rid of the trash and the newspapers.
8.What happened right after the neighbor said she could not afford to pay him to help her with her groceries?
He helped her anyway.
He helped her anyway.
>>> He helped her anyway and she gave him some flowers for his stepmother.
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