A PSYCHOLOGIST

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Thanks for doing your homework.

I totally agree with what you said here.

We have to work hard to find our \"happiness\".

Music is actually one of the things that makes me completely happy.

Check my corrections here.

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~Teacher Marie~ ^^

It would be a psychologist.

>> CORRECT!

I assume that people want to be happy but they are suffering from psychological problems.

>> I think most people want to be happy, but they are suffering from psychological problems.

Our life is limited and we continue to ask ourselves WHO WE ARE.

>> Our time is and we continue to ask ourselves who we are.

Psychology is the study of the mind and it might help us understand the hardest question. 

>> CORRECT!
 I think happiness exists in our mind but it seems to like to play hide-and-seek so we have to find it.

>> I think happiness exists in our mind, but it might be playing hide-and-seek with us so we have to go and find it.

I experienced very special feeling two weeks ago.

>> I experienced something special two weeks ago.

At that time I was swimming in the swimming pool, putting on waterproof earphones to listen to a beautiful music for the first time.

>> At that time, I was swimming in the pool, putting on waterproof earphones, and listening to a beautiful song for the first time.

I had swum in the pool every morning but I didn\'t recognize that the place was so wonderful.

>> I swam in the pool every morning but I didn\'t realize that it was a wonderful place.

Music helped me know the place.

>> Music helped me become more aware of my surroundings.

I think psychologists can make the role like the music in our life.

>> I think psychologists can be like the music in our lives.