A Queen

2011-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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I'm sure you've heard about Yun-A Kim once or more. Did you watch the competition of skating last weekend ? I didn't know about the rules of skating competition and it was boring to wait for our player's turn. She has been always the first since I recognized her. Thanks to every people who like her, she has earned unimaginable money by appearing in advertising. So I didn't think that she was a human. The reason why I didn't like her so much. However, I love her from last Sunday. Even though she got the silver medal, she looked the most lovely I've ever seen. I felt hair-raising when I listened to Homage to Korea with the world. I'm really proud of her who could let the world people concentrate the song.

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Hi [이름]! I think you뭭e told me about her before and I have read some news about her having less attention than the Japanese skater in a Europian magazine, if I뭢 not mistaken. I am having a hard time remembering her name since I am not used to Korean names but if you would say the most famous skater in Korea then I would already know you are pertaining about same girl that I뭭e read about. Kk^0^ -Tiny^0^ I'm sure you've heard about Yun-A Kim once or more. >>correctDid you watch the competition of skating last weekend? >>correctI didn't know about the rules of skating competition and it was boring to wait for our player's turn. >>correctShe has been always the first since I recognized her. >>correctThanks to every people who like her, she has earned unimaginable money by appearing in advertising. >>correctSo I didn't think that she was a human. >>correctThe reason why I didn't like her so much. >>That뭩 the reason why I didn뭪 like here so much. >> grammar tip: 뱓he reason why I didn't like her so much

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