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Could you check out these sentences as well for me?
In the future I want to be an accountant. I'm studying hard at school to make the dream come true.
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Hello there,
Thank you so much for dropping by this Friday night.
Have a terrific weekend and oh by the way great sentences J no major corrections.
God bless,
Julie ^^*
Could you check out these sentences as well for me?>> Can you check these sentences for me?In the future I want to be an accountant.
>> Correct OR
>> I want to be an accountant in the future.
I'm studying hard at school to make the dream come true.
>> I’m studying hard in school to make my dream come true.
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