A quick decision makers

2017-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Anyone should always be choices whatever circumstances occur. Life is a series of choices. When I get up in the morning, I should be choose to drink a water first or go to the restroom first. But these are not essential part. These things can change the turn, they don't have to be done. Because it is it does not damage others. But there are jobs which need to do a work quickly and a quick decision make. That is a newspaper report(journalist). The journalists deal with the news which happen in the whole world. The cases in the world are infinite, but the papers are limited. And then, it demands to do a choice. There must make a quick choice as soon as possible. The news agency(the press) needs to inform the news to the public immediately. I think that journalists are the ones who choose the moment. Is there any job that demands to do a decision-make faster than a newspaper reports?

강사 첨삭


Hi there [이름]!

Maybe, aside from newspaper reporters we could also add those in the medical field specially specialist like neurosurgeons, emergency response time and the like.

Take care!

~T. Lynn

Anyone should always be choices whatever circumstances occur.

>> Anyone should have choices whatever circumstances occur.

 Life is a series of choices.

>> correct!

When I get up in the morning, I should be choose to drink a water first or go to the restroom first.

>> When I get up in the morning, I should have a choice either to drink water first or go to the restroom first.

But these are not essential part.

>> But these are not essential parts.

These things can change the turn, they don\'t have to be done.

>> These things can change, they don\'t have to be done.

 Because it is it does not damage others.

>> Because if it does, it does not damage others.

But there are jobs which need to do a work quickly and a quick decision make.

>> But there are jobs which are needed to be done quickly and quick decisions should be made.

That is a newspaper report(journalist).

>> That is  a newspaper reporter or a journalist.

The journalists deal with the news which happen in the whole world.

>> correct!

The cases in the world are infinite, but the papers are limited.

>> correct!

And then, it demands to do a choice.

>> correct!

There must make a quick choice as soon as possible.

>> There is  a must to make a quick choice as soon as possible.

The news agency(the press) needs to inform the news to the public immediately.

>> correct!

I think that journalists are the ones who choose the moment.

>> correct!

Is there any job that demands to do a decision-make faster than a newspaper reports?

>> Is there any job that demands a decision to be made as fast as possible than newspaper reporters?

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