A quick decision makers
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Hi there [이름]!
Maybe, aside from newspaper reporters we could also add those in the medical field specially specialist like neurosurgeons, emergency response time and the like.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Anyone should always be choices whatever circumstances occur.
>> Anyone should have choices whatever circumstances occur.
Life is a series of choices.
>> correct!
When I get up in the morning, I should be choose to drink a water first or go to the restroom first.
>> When I get up in the morning, I should have a choice either to drink water first or go to the restroom first.
But these are not essential part.
>> But these are not essential parts.
These things can change the turn, they don\'t have to be done.
>> These things can change, they don\'t have to be done.
Because it is it does not damage others.
>> Because if it does, it does not damage others.
But there are jobs which need to do a work quickly and a quick decision make.
>> But there are jobs which are needed to be done quickly and quick decisions should be made.
That is a newspaper report(journalist).
>> That is a newspaper reporter or a journalist.
The journalists deal with the news which happen in the whole world.
>> correct!
The cases in the world are infinite, but the papers are limited.
>> correct!
And then, it demands to do a choice.
>> correct!
There must make a quick choice as soon as possible.
>> There is a must to make a quick choice as soon as possible.
The news agency(the press) needs to inform the news to the public immediately.
>> correct!
I think that journalists are the ones who choose the moment.
>> correct!
Is there any job that demands to do a decision-make faster than a newspaper reports?
>> Is there any job that demands a decision to be made as fast as possible than newspaper reporters?
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