A Rainy day
학생이 쓴 원문
It's raining. Rainy day, I am absorbed by a conception.
When I hear the sound of dropped raining, I am wrapped up in my hazy first love. and when I listen to the sound of raining and music which I favorite, a girl who had gone seems to be with me.
Rainy day makes me fall in remembrance.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!...Sometimes, rainy season makes us think a lot of things. But instead of making your self feels sad about the weather, why not try to do something new. Try to be creative.:)Smile always!
It's raining. Rainy day, I am absorbed by a conception.
>>>It's raining. Rainy day.I am absorbed with a conception.
When I hear the sound of dropped raining, I am wrapped up in my hazy first love. and when I listen to the sound of raining and music which I favorite, a girl who had gone seems to be with me.
>>>When I heard the sound of rain drops, I am wrapped up with my hazy first love.
>>>And when, I listened to the sound of the rain and my favorite song, a girl who was once lost seems to be with me again.
Rainy day makes me fall in remembrance.
>>>Rainy day makes me re[이름]isce.
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