A respected writer
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite novelist is a Korean web novel writer whose pen name is \'Naturalism\'. I respect her by using her characters well and writing heavy but immersive.
강사 첨삭
My favorite novelist is a Korean web novel writer whose pen name is \'Naturalism\'.
>> CORRECT
I respect her by using her characters well and writing heavy but immersive.
>> I respect her by writing well-developed characters and crafting stories that are heavy yet immersive.
OR >> I look up to her and try to use her characters thoughtfully while writing stories that are deep but engaging.
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