A secret of satisfaction
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
This is an eye-opening, Ms. [이름]!
Only Him can supplement the things we need in our lives. If we learn how to be grateful from simple things that we have, we can appreciated more of what life has to offer. You handed in a wonderful composition. Keep them coming!
~Teacher Eunice
I appreciate and satisfied my current situation.
>>> I appreciate my current situation.
>>> OR: I am satisfied with my current situation.
Because I feel that God is with me, and I eat well with my good friends and family and I love each other.
>>> Because I can feel that God is with me, so I eat well with my good friends and family, and we love each other.
Life is always satisfactory without great care.
>>> Life is always satisfactory with a great care.
My dream is to love God and live together with the people I love.
>>> Correct!
Eat well, pray well and love well!
>>> Correct!
That\'s the life.
>>> That\'s life.
If only one Lord is with me current situation is always satisfied.
>>> If only The Lord is with me, I am always satisfied with my current situation.
>>> OR: I am always satisfied with my current situation because of The Lord.
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