A Simple way to save people

2018-07-02 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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The ordinary people shuld know CPR. Because we don\'t know that emergency situation occur when and where. It\'s simple understand CPR, but anyone who knows this simple way can save a person from the brink of death.

강사 첨삭

A great Monday Ms. [이름]!

Yes, that\'s true. This would be a great help for people suffering from heart attack and resuscitating drowned people. Thank you for handing in your writing task. See you in our class!

~Teacher Eunice

The ordinary people shuld know CPR.
>>> Ordinary people should know how to perform CPR.

Because we don\'t know that emergency situation occur when and where.
>>> Because we don\'t know when and where an emergency situation will occur.
It\'s simple understand CPR, but anyone who knows this simple way can save a person from the brink of death.

>>> It\'s simple to understand CPR, but anyone who knows this simple way can save a person from the brink of death.

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