A single child
학생이 쓴 원문
Are you a single child? Or, do you have brothers and sisters? Well,I am a single child. And I think being a single child is better than having brothers and sisters. But, why? If you are curious, read more! First,being a single child means that you can have your clothes new.As I said before, I am a single child. My clothes are all new!Some clothes are not that new because some clothes are from cousins. But most of my clothes are new!I get to have clothes that are my style. Second, you get less stress. Having sisters and brothers could be stressful. Some sisters and brothers could be cute and kind. But most are\'nt.My friend and his sister always fight. Third, I can experience more things.I always liked making,My mom and dad could take me to cool places.I could see and make more things. But if I had a brother or sister, they would be so busy taking care of him or her! There would be less and less time.NowI, having a sister is better, or is being a single child is better?
강사 첨삭
Hello Rose! Yes, being a single child is great. But having brothers or sisters have it\'s advantages as well. Have a good day ahead!
T. Matt
Are you a single child?Or, do you have brothers and sisters?
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>>Are you a single child or do you have brothers and sisters?
Well,I am a single child.
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And I think being a single child is better than having brothers and sisters.
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But, why?
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If you are curious, read more!
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First, being a single child means that you can have your clothes new.
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>>First, being a single child means that you can have new clothes.
As I said before, I am a single child.
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My clothes are all new!
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Some clothes are not that new because some clothes are from cousins.
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>> Some clothes are not that new because some clothes are from my cousins.
But most of my clothes are new!
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I get to have clothes that are my style.
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Second, you get less stress.
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Having sisters and brothers could be stressful.
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Some sisters and brothers could be cute and kind.
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But most are\'nt.
>> However, most aren\'t
My friend and his sister always fight.
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Third, I can experience more things
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I always liked making,My mom and dad could take me to cool places.
>>I always liked making my mom and dad take me to cool places.
I could see and make more things.
>>Correct
But if I had a brother or sister, they would be so busy taking care of him or her!
>>Correct
There would be less and less time.
>>Correct
NowI, having a sister is better, or is being a single child is better?
>>Now, having a sister is better or is being a single child is better?
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