A small gift

A man who has a small boat usually go fishing with his family to the lake every summer. As summer season come to close, he drag out the boat to the land and found small hole in th bottom of the boat. He thought that he will fix it next spring, because he will not use the boat during winter. As winter has come, he forget the small hole in the boat and get a painter painted the boat newly and completely. Next spring has come early, and his two sons asked him that they want to get the boat. He allowed them to take the boat while completely forgot the hole in the boat. After two hours, small hole in the boat suddenly come across his mind. They are not accustomed to swimming, so he run to the lake to save them. But, he found them come back with their boat. He is so relieved and try to find the hole, but some one fill up the hole. He thought it was the painter who did this, and he give thanks to him about saving his son's life. "An small unintentional deed can be a great things to someone"

Dear [Name]. [이름],   An awesome Tuesday to you! ^.^ Happy day! ^^   Thank you for a good sharing again today! ^^, I enjoyed reflecting on your composition. It made me remember my purpose why I took teaching. It is to give service beyond my profession. It is also a concept that people should know about having a good life and a good stay in the earth. We should do things that are needed, and we can do them even though they are not our tasks. That action can really make a diffence to another person\'s life.   By the way, don\'t forget to see the corrections and suggestions for your writing carefully.   That\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you soon! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     A man who has a small boat usually go fishing with his family to the lake every summer. >> CORRECT! As summer season come to close, he drag out the boat to the land and found small hole in th bottom of the boat. >> As summer season came too close, he dragged the boat out to the land and found small holes in the bottom of the boat. >> OR: One summer season came too close, he dragged the boat out from the water to the land and found some small holes in the bottom of the boat. He thought that he will fix it next spring, because he will not use the boat during winter. >> He thought of fixing it next spring, because he wouldn\'t use the boat during the winter. As winter has come, he forget the small hole in the boat and get a painter painted the boat newly and completely. >> As winter has come, he forgot the small holes in the boat and got a painter to paint it newly and completely. Next spring has come early, and his two sons asked him that they want to get the boat. >> Next spring has come early, and his two sons asked him that they wanted to get the boat. >> OR: Spring was approaching than expedted, and his two sons asked him about using the boat. He allowed them to take the boat while completely forgot the hole in the boat. >> He allowed them to take the boat while he completely forgot the holes. After two hours, small hole in the boat suddenly come across his mind. >> After two hours, small holes in the boat suddenly came across his mind. They are not accustomed to swimming, so he run to the lake to save them. >> His sons were not accustomed to swimming, so he ran to the lake to save them. But, he found them come back with their boat. >> But, he found them coming back with their boat. He is so relieved and try to find the hole, but some one fill up the hole. >> He was so relieved and tried to find the holes, but someone filled them up. He thought it was the painter who did this, and he give thanks to him about saving his son\'s life. >> He thought it was teh painter who did it, and he gave thanks to him about saving his son\'s lives.\"An small unintentional deed can be a great things to someone\" >> \"A small unintentional deed can be a great thing to someone.\" >> OR: \"A small doing which is done unintentionally can be a great thing to someone.\"