A Speech

Dear [Name]. [이름],

A magnificent Tuesday to us! ^.^

First of all, I would like to say THANK YOU for sharing this nice story to me. ^^

It reminded me what my mother told me that it is better to keep quiet if I don\'t have any good things to say.

Thank you very much! ^^,

Anyway, I really think that our tongues are really powerful.

We can make or ruin someone\'s life by our words.

I strongly agree that we should give compliments to each other.

Let\'s avoid hurting each other. ^^.

That\'s all for now, but don\'t remember to read the corrections and suggestion below. ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you very soon! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

A story is written in Talmud.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: The story below is originally written in Talmud.

A king called two clown and ordered one to find the most bad thing and the other to find the best thing in the world.

>> A king called two clowns and ordered one to find the worst thing and the other to find the best thing in the world. (C1 TWO CLOWN should be TWO CLOWNS. REMEMBER: one clown ... two clowns C2 THE MOST BAD THING should be THE WORST THING. REMEMBER: bad ... worse ... worst)

Sometime later, two clown came back with answers.

>> Sometime later, the two clowns came back with answers. (C3 There should be THE before TWO CLOWNS since it is already the second time that you used TWO CLOWNS.)

>> OR: Sometime later, the clowns went back with answers. (It is also okay to remove TWO, because it is understood that we know the clowns already.)

But the answers of two clowns were the same \" tongue\".

>> But, the answers of the two clowns were the same, and it is \"tongue.\" (C4 There should be a COMMA after BUT. C5 THE should be placed before TWO CLOWNS. C6 To complete your sentence, add AND IT IS \"TONGUE\" after putting a COMMA after SENTENSE.) 

>> OR: However, their answers were the same, and it is \"tongue.\"

Tongue could be a medicine or poison according to how to use it. 

>> CORRECT!

A young criminal was sentenced to death.

>> CORRECT!

He said in the court \"When I was 17 yrs old high school student, I was scolded by the teacher for not bringing craypas at art class.

>> C7 I THINK IT IS BETTER TO SAY: He said in the court, \"When I was 17 years old high school student, I was scolded by the teacher for not bringing cray-pas at our art class.

>> OR: He said in the court, \"When I was 17 yrs. old high school student, I was scolded by my teacher for not bringing crayp-as at our art class.

At that time, I was so poor that I can\'t buy the craypas, but I didn\'t have the heart to say that to teacher.

>> At that time, I was so poor that I couldn\'t buy the cray-pas, but I didn\'t have the heart to say that to my teacher. (C7 CAN\'T should be COULDN\'T.)

>> OR: At that time, I was so poor that I couldn\'t buy the cray-pas, but I didn\'t have the heart to say that to her (him).

The teacher hit me saying that you should bring it even if stole it.

>> My teacher hit me while said, \"You should bring it even if you steal it.\" (C8 It is better to write MY TEACHER than THE TEACHER. C9 SAYING THAT should be WHILE SAYING.)

Since then, I went a wrong way.

>> Since then, I went to a wrong way. (C10 Put TO after WENT. C11 There should be A before WRONG WAY.)

Only one word of my teacher change me to become a thief and made my life wrong\".

>> Only one word of my teacher changed me to become a thief and made my life wrong.\" (C12 CHANGE should be CHANGED.)

Like this, speech has a strong power.

>> CORRECT!

There is proverb in korea \" Speech can be a seed\".

>> There is a proverb in Korea and says, \"Speech can be a seed.\" (C13 K in KOREA should be capitalized. C14 There should be A before PROVERB. C15 To complete your sentence, AND SAYS with a COMMA after should be written after KOREA.)

Compliment have more strong power than scolding.

>> A compliment has a stronger power than a scolding. (C16 There should be A before COMPLIMENT and SCOLDING. C17 REMEMBER: strong ... stronger ... strongest)

Let\'s pay a compliment to each other.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Let\'s compliment each other.