A stressful job with very high pay or a relaxing job with considerably low pay?

2022-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I should choose a relaxing job with low pay. Because I want to take my time and work, And then it\'s good to have a career and move to a company that pays a lot of money.

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic!

I think that is a good choice. I would also pick that. Hahaha!

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I should choose a relaxing job with low pay. Because I want to take my time and work,

>> I should choose a relaxing job with low pay because I want to have a life and work balance.

And then it\'s good to have a career and move to a company that pays a lot of money.

>> It is good to have a career and move to a company that pays a lot of money as well.

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