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2013-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

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I want to learn cooking. Because I love to eat delicious food. And actually I like to make something by hands. But unfortunately I don't have skill to make something good. So I think if I took the class of cooking, I could be better than now.

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Hi there [이름], Cooking skills are really a plus for women. They say that women look more appealing when they are good in the kitchen.^^ Don\'t worry, it\'s not yet late to take those cooking lessons. Stay positive that you can become a good cook one day. See you later. -- T. Giselle   I want to learn cooking. Because I love to eat delicious food. >> Correct. BETTER: I want to learn how to cook because I love to eat delicious foods.And actually I like to make something by hands.>> Correct.But unfortunately I don\'t have skill to make something good.>> But unfortunately, I don\'t have the skills in making something good.So I think if I took the class of cooking, I could be better than now. >> So I think if I took cooking classes before, I could be better now. OR : If I have started taking cooking classes before, I could be a better cook now.

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