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학생이 쓴 원문
I want to learn cooking. Because I love to eat delicious food.
And actually I like to make something by hands.
But unfortunately I don't have skill to make something good.
So I think if I took the class of cooking, I could be better than now.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름],
Cooking skills are really a plus for women.
They say that women look more appealing when they are good in the kitchen.^^
Don\'t worry, it\'s not yet late to take those cooking lessons.
Stay positive that you can become a good cook one day.
See you later.
-- T. Giselle
I want to learn cooking. Because I love to eat delicious food.
>> Correct.
BETTER: I want to learn how to cook because I love to eat delicious foods.And actually I like to make something by hands.>> Correct.But unfortunately I don\'t have skill to make something good.>> But unfortunately, I don\'t have the skills in making something good.So I think if I took the class of cooking, I could be better than now.
>> So I think if I took cooking classes before, I could be better now.
OR : If I have started taking cooking classes before, I could be a better cook now.
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