a terrible memory.
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Hi there [이름]!
It must be devastating for you.
Anyway, one lesson learned is not to be so trustful.
The world is full of cunning people.
I hope you won\'t experience such situation again.
Thanks for writing this.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
When some people ask me ‘when was the most difficult time for you?’,
My answer is always same.
>>> When some people ask me when was the most difficult time for me, my answer is always the same.
Because that memory that I had experienced was too shocked to forget.
>>> Because that experience I had was too shocking to forget.
That is.. I had been swindled by who even don’t know about name and face.
>>> What happened was I was swindled by a complete stranger.
That is too long story to explain all the situations about that, The conclusion is that I was cheated.
>>> It is a very long story to tell. The conclusion is that I was cheated.
I had trusted myself before I was cheated.
>>> Correct!
I thought I’m always positive and never fall into deep despair.
>>> I thought I\'m always positive so I will never fall into deep despair.
But, After I realized that I was cheated, I was so embarrassed.
>>> But after I realized I was cheated, I was so embarrassed.
I couldn’t do anything literally.
>>> Correct!
Actually, losing money was not a problem.
>>> Correct!
So, What was made me crazy?
>>> So, what made me crazy?
That was I realized that i could be a victim anytime from an unknown Person.
>>> That was the truth that I could be a victim by an unknown person anytime.
In order to forget that fact, I went to the movie theater alone, listened the song what I loved, took a nap and so on..
>>> In order to forget that fact, I went to the movie theater alone, listened to the songs that I loved, took a nap and so on.
But I couldn’t forget.
>>> Correct!
I had cried every night. Literally, “Every night”
>>> I had cried literally every night.
Finally, It became a episode one of I experienced.
>>> Finally, it became an episode of the past.
Now, I can laugh, Thinking of the episode.
>>> Now, I can laugh while thinking about that part of my life.
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