a terrible memory.

2018-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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When some people ask me ‘when was the most difficult time for you?’, My answer is always same. Because that memory that I had experienced was too shocked to forget. That is.. I had been swindled by who even don’t know about name and face. That is too long story to explain all the situations about that, The conclusion is that I was cheated. I had trusted myself before I was cheated. I thought I’m always positive and never fall into deep despair. But, After I realized that I was cheated, I was so embarrassed. I couldn’t do anything literally. Actually, losing money was not a problem. So, What was made me crazy? That was I realized that i could be a victim anytime from an unknown Person. In order to forget that fact, I went to the movie theater alone, listened the song what I loved, took a nap and so on.. But I couldn’t forget. I had cried every night. Literally, “Every night” Finally, It became a episode one of I experienced. Now, I can laugh, Thinking of the episode.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

It must be devastating for you.

Anyway, one lesson learned is not to be so trustful.

The world is full of cunning people.

I hope you won\'t experience such situation again.

Thanks for writing this.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


When some people ask me ‘when was the most difficult time for you?’,

My answer is always same.

>>> When some people ask me when was the most difficult time for me, my answer is always the same.
Because that memory that I had experienced was too shocked to forget.

>>> Because that experience I had was too shocking to forget.

That is.. I had been swindled by who even don’t know about name and face. 

>>> What happened was I was swindled by a complete stranger.
 That is too long story to explain all the situations about that, The conclusion is that I was cheated.

>>> It is a very long story to tell. The conclusion is that I was cheated.
I had trusted myself before I was cheated.

>>> Correct!

I thought I’m always positive and never fall into deep despair.

>>> I thought I\'m always positive so I will never fall into deep despair.

But, After I realized that I was cheated, I was so embarrassed.

>>> But after I realized I was cheated, I was so embarrassed.

I couldn’t do anything literally. 

>>> Correct!


 Actually, losing money was not a problem.

>>> Correct!

So, What was made me crazy?

>>> So, what made me crazy?

That was I realized that i could be a victim anytime from an unknown Person.

>>> That was the truth that I could be a victim by an unknown person anytime.

In order to forget that fact, I went to the movie theater alone, listened the song what I loved, took a nap and so on..

>>> In order to forget that fact, I went to the movie theater alone, listened to the songs that I loved, took a nap and so on.

But I couldn’t forget.

>>> Correct!

I had cried every night. Literally, “Every night”

>>> I had cried literally every night.
Finally, It became a episode one of I experienced.

>>> Finally, it became an episode of the past.

Now, I can laugh, Thinking of the episode.

>>> Now, I can laugh while thinking about that part of my life.

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