A thing what i bought made me happy best ever.
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I would say the best thing that i bought is an IPAD. A years ago, i was calling for a notebook to study. Even though there was a plenty of notebooks, i couldn’t find what i want in the aspect of function. After few days, i saw an IPAD with a IPAD’s pencil. I cannot ignore the ad on the IPAD. However, i only wish i could buy that. That’s why i was not enough to purchase it. But then my sisters might observe my behavior, my being keen eyes for it , and my sister said “if i buy the IPAD for you, can you do it everything until further down the road? :>” and i was nodding my head more and more. Therefore she bought me real, and i was frozen because i didn’t believe her’s say at the time.
I said her thank you so much. Whenever she just order like “Let me take some water plz~” and i can’t refuse now. I am like a slave.
But I am really appreciate her.
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Hi [이름] [이름]!^^
Keep on practicing and improving!
See you in class.
See you in class.
~Kelly^^
I would say the best thing that i bought is an IPAD. >> I would say the best thing that I bought is an IPAD.
A years ago, i was calling for a notebook to study.
>> A year ago, I used my notebook for my mobile class.
Even though there was a plenty of notebooks, i couldn’t find what i want in the aspect of function.
>> Even though there were different types notebooks, I couldn\'t find what I wanted in terms of function.
After few days, i saw an IPAD with a IPAD’s pencil.
>> After a few days, I saw an IPAD with an IPAD’s pencil.
I cannot ignore the ad on the IPAD.
>> Correct.
However, i only wish i could buy that.
>> However, I only wish I could buy that.
That’s why i was not enough to purchase it.
>> That’s why it was not enough to purchase it.
But then my sisters might observe my behavior, my being keen eyes for it , and my sister said “if i buy the IPAD for you, can you do it everything until further down the road? :>” and i was nodding my head more and more.
>> But then my sisters might observe my behavior, my being keen eyes for it, and my sister said “if i buy the IPAD for you, can you do everything until further down the road? :>” and I was nodding my head more and more.
Therefore she bought me real, and i was frozen because i didn’t believe her’s say at the time.
>> Therefore she really bought me, and I was frozen because I didn’t believe what she said at that time.
I said her thank you so much.
I said her thank you so much.
>> I thanked her.
Whenever she just order like “Let me take some water plz~” and i can’t refuse now.
>> Whenever she orders something like “Let me take some water plz~”, I can\'t refuse anymore.
I am like a slave.
>> Correct.
But I am really appreciate her.
But I am really appreciate her.
>> But I really appreciate her.
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