a tourism slogan
학생이 쓴 원문
There are somethings I felt after visiting America a few times.
Internet speed and number key, automatic door, bidet, public transportation.....
Which made me uncomfortable.
I wondered why there was no such convenient facility when I thought the US was an advanced country.
But I knew that each country was in a different situation.
No matter what you imagine the fastest internet will guide you there.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]. I appreciate your effort in doing your homework. Keep up the good work. See you in class! Have a great day.
Here are your corrections:
>> There are things that I felt after visiting America for a few times.
>> Those are internet speed, number key, automatic door, bidet, and public transportation.
>> Those things made me uncomfortable.
I wondered why there was no such convenient facility when I thought the US was an advanced country.
>> CORRECT
>> But, I knew that each country has different situations.
>> CORRECT
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