A tragic accident
학생이 쓴 원문
What I am talking to you now is not what I read, but what I heard.
My colleague\'s father suddenly pass away yesterday.
I heard that he was died by the car accident.
It could be a tragic accident.
That accident happened at the train crossing while he crossed the place.
Immediately he was sent to hospital emergency, but being old, he pass away in three hours since he arrived at hospital.
I am really sad and heartbroken.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha.
This is really tragic news.
I\'m so sorry to hear that.
I wish your father is doing well.
It\'s always hard to lose someone.
We\'ll talk more about this in class.
~~ Teacher Sharon
What I am talking to you now is not what I read, but what I heard.
>> What I will tell you now is not what I read, but what I heard.
My colleague\'s father suddenly pass away yesterday.
My colleague\'s father suddenly pass away yesterday.
>> My colleague\'s father suddenly passed away yesterday.
I heard that he was died by the car accident.
I heard that he was died by the car accident.
>> I heard that he died in a car accident.
It could be a tragic accident.
It could be a tragic accident.
>> It was tragic.
That accident happened at the train crossing while he crossed the place.
That accident happened at the train crossing while he crossed the place.
>> That accident happened at the train crossing while he was trying to go to the other side.
Immediately he was sent to hospital emergency, but being old, he pass away in three hours since he arrived at hospital.
Immediately he was sent to hospital emergency, but being old, he pass away in three hours since he arrived at hospital.
>> Immediately, he was sent to the hospital emergency room, but as he was already old, he passed away three hours from the time he arrived at the hospital.
I am really sad and heartbroken.
I am really sad and heartbroken.
>> Correct
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