A tubercle patient
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A tubercle patient, only raise tolerance without abusing dug constantly.
I went to the hospital because my baby coughs without a break. During the waiting for examination, I heard the conversation between a doctor and a patient without meaning to do. I heard that the patient asked to a doctor that tubercle is still in Korea? Then I heard the doctor answered that “Yes still many tubercles in Korea.
Many people mistake a tubercle is gone in Korea. However, there are coming 45thousands tubercle patients every year in Korea, and 60~70 thousands including unreported patient. It’s incredible. More surprising fact is that Korea is the No.1 country in an incidence and a death rate among the joining OECD countries.
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A tubercle patient, only raise tolerance without abusing dug constantly.>> A tuberculosis patient only raises tolerance without constantly abusing drugs.I went to the hospital because my baby coughs without a break.
>> Correct.
>> I went to the hospital because my baby coughs continually.
During the waiting for examination, I heard the conversation between a doctor and a patient without meaning to do.
>> While waiting to be examined, I unintentionally overheard the conversation between the doctor and the patient.
I heard that the patient asked to a doctor that tubercle is still in Korea?
>> I heard the patient asking the doctor about the case of tuberculosis in Korea.
Then I heard the doctor answered that “Yes still many tubercles in Korea.>> I heard the doctor said that there are still tuberculosis cases in Korea.Many people mistake a tubercle is gone in Korea.
>> Many people mistakenly think that there is no case of tuberculosis in Korea.
However, there are coming 45thousands tubercle patients every year in Korea, and 60~70 thousands including unreported patient.
>> However, there are 45,000 tuberculosis patients in Korea every year. It reaches up to 60,000-70,000 including the unreported cases.
It’s incredible.
>> Correct.
More surprising fact is that Korea is the No.1 country in an incidence and a death rate among the joining OECD countries.
>> The more surprising fact is that Korea is the No. 1 country among the OECD countries with a high case and mortality rate caused by tuberculosis.
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