A tubercle patient

2011-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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A tubercle patient, only raise tolerance without abusing dug constantly. I went to the hospital because my baby coughs without a break. During the waiting for examination, I heard the conversation between a doctor and a patient without meaning to do. I heard that the patient asked to a doctor that tubercle is still in Korea? Then I heard the doctor answered that “Yes still many tubercles in Korea. Many people mistake a tubercle is gone in Korea. However, there are coming 45thousands tubercle patients every year in Korea, and 60~70 thousands including unreported patient. It’s incredible. More surprising fact is that Korea is the No.1 country in an incidence and a death rate among the joining OECD countries.

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Hello there! Thank you for your composition today. Please be guided by the corrections I provided. Have a great day! T. Whitney   A tubercle patient, only raise tolerance without abusing dug constantly.>> A tuberculosis patient only raises tolerance without constantly abusing drugs.I went to the hospital because my baby coughs without a break. >> Correct. >> I went to the hospital because my baby coughs continually. During the waiting for examination, I heard the conversation between a doctor and a patient without meaning to do. >> While waiting to be examined, I unintentionally overheard the conversation between the doctor and the patient. I heard that the patient asked to a doctor that tubercle is still in Korea? >> I heard the patient asking the doctor about the case of tuberculosis in Korea. Then I heard the doctor answered that “Yes still many tubercles in Korea.>> I heard the doctor said that there are still tuberculosis cases in Korea.Many people mistake a tubercle is gone in Korea. >> Many people mistakenly think that there is no case of tuberculosis in Korea. However, there are coming 45thousands tubercle patients every year in Korea, and 60~70 thousands including unreported patient. >> However, there are 45,000 tuberculosis patients in Korea every year. It reaches up to 60,000-70,000 including the unreported cases. It’s incredible. >> Correct. More surprising fact is that Korea is the No.1 country in an incidence and a death rate among the joining OECD countries. >> The more surprising fact is that Korea is the No. 1 country among the OECD countries with a high case and mortality rate caused by tuberculosis.

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